Date: 2012-09-10 05:12 pm (UTC)
...she thinks ‘you sorry bitch, he’s going to come looking for me’ because he will, she knows he will, ... She knows because she knows him. She knows because she loves him.

<33333 Of *course* that lovely realization would be followed by MAJOR ANGST. I love it to pieces in spite of (because of?) this fact.

Also, yeah, this: "I felt his name on my lips, at the beginning." Completely threw me for a loop. What does it all meeeeeaaaaan? I feel like I should know, but I don't.

You've done a great job setting up all the original supporting characters in the story. Totally hope Bruno and Sloane get what's coming to them (sounds like Bruno, at least, already has), and that Saja gets the help she needs.

Steve and Clint really need to go out and get beers after all this, too.
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